A Developmental Edit
A developmental edit is a collaborative journey that transforms your completed manuscript into its strongest possible version. As your story detective, I delve deep into your narrative's foundations, uncovering hidden opportunities and identifying elements that will elevate your story's impact. This intensive editorial process combines big-picture analysis with specific strategies, empowering you with both the insights and tools needed for meaningful revision. Together, we'll strengthen your story while preserving your unique voice and creative vision.
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Comprehensive
For authors ready to elevate their complete manuscript through detailed, actionable feedback and specific revision strategies.
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What's Included:
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A substantional 10+ page editorial letter
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Strategic in-text comments and suggestions
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Customized craft resources
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A one-hour follow-up call to discuss revision strategy
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Areas We'll Strengthen:
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Plot structure and pacing
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Character development and arcs
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Story stakes and conflict
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Theme development
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Scene structure and effectiveness
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World-building and setting
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Dialogue and character voice
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Opening hook and ending payoff
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What You'll Gain:
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Clear path for revision
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Specific strategies for strengthening your narrative
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Tools for developing key story elements
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Deeper understanding of your story's potential
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Turnaround Time: 4-6 weeks
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Rate: $0.015 per word
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**Note: While this service includes in-text comments and suggestions, it is not a line edit. The focus remains on story development and narrative elements rather than sentence-level corrections.
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Ready to get started working together?
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Here's how:
1. Contact me here or by email to discuss your project
2. Schedule a 30-minute consultation call
3. Review and sign the service agreement
4. Submit manuscript and deposit
5. Receive confirmation of timeline
6. Begin our collaboration
7. Receive the editorial packet and schedule a one-hour follow-up call.